My Claim:
I want people to find a better balance in their lives, specifically by learning how to enjoy work.
My Reasons:
People will lead happier and more fulfilling lives by using some of these ideas.
Support:
I have research from the Mayo clinic showing how to better balance life. Most importantly it talks about how to take time for yourself away from work. In other words, do not let work take over your life.
It also suggests taking advantage of all your options. If your employer offers benefits and is making an effort to help you out, use them. It will show the employer that you are trying to balance your life, you will be more productive, and you will eventually end up happier.
Another of my sources is a book called Happy Hour is 9 to 5. The author in this book emphasizes that to balance our work with the rest of life, we must strive to make work fun.
By making work fun, we recognize that work is not as bad as we sometimes make it out to be, and that we can actually enjoy work instead of dreading it.
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are you saying that any specific job can be more enjoyable? Maybe the support you give should be more relevant to your claim? Your claim needs to be more assertive and more demanding. Convince those reading your argument that you are right, and there is no debate.
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